Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

People
in some
countries
have knowledge of
waste
separation
and act followed a regulation of
waste
control. While
people
in other
countries
do not carry out the
separation
of
waste
regardless of the environment. So, the
government
should have a penalty for these
people
to create awareness about global warming for them. A reason to support my idea will be outlined in the following paragraph. Nowadays, many
countries
not
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pay much attention of the recycle which affects directly
to
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the environment,
for instance
, almost population in Thailand have
not
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no
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the
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apply
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knowledge of
recycle
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recycling
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and
the
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apply
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waste
separation
. So, they cannot separate
a rubbish
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rubbish
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such
as plastics, papers and glasses.
As a result
, they
be
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careless
the
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effect of natural problems.
Finally
, the
government
do all duty of the
separation
processes which make their budget highly by hiring
employee
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an employee
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to classify
waste
.
In addition
, the
government
will lose some wastes to recycle because the
waste
damaged
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is damaged
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by other wastes in the bin. So, the
government
must have a regulation of
waste
separation
and the penalty for their
people
whose
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who
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break the rule.
Moreover
, the
government
must create awareness for
population
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the population
a population
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to know about beneficial recycling and
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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of
careless
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carelessness
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.
On the other hand
, some
countries
have a lower duty of
waste
separation
than these
countries
mentioned because their
people
have the responsibility of
waste
separation
and understand the knowledge of recycling these make the
government
working easily to
waste
management
such
as Japan and the rest of developed
countries
which can find these habits. In summary, the usage of rules depends on the responsibility and habits of their population. If they are not the responsibility of
waste
management, the
government
should have the regulation to let
people
follow the rules.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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