There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that because of the advancement in machines in recent times, the
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improved significantly. I completely agree with Correct subject-verb agreement
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Admittedly, there are some minor drawbacks to the use of machinery. One of which is that it increases the crime rate in society. Youngsters acquire negative knowledge and learn Linking Words
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fraud as they are exposed to diverse videos that teach these things on the internet. When they acquire these skills, they use them for evil intent. Change preposition
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, people are defrauded of valuable items including money. Linking Words
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, making these weapons and causing havoc in society.
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, despite the above demerit associated with the utilization of machinery. I believe that it has brought a lot of positive changes. Technological usage has made learning easier and faster. Linking Words
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, young adults are able to apply themselves in their studies because they have access to the internet, which makes it easier and faster for them to obtain information and meet deadlines in school. Linking Words
Also
, household cleaning is quicker and faster with the adoption of technology as opposed to the utilization of manual instruments.
In conclusion, despite the basic Linking Words
drawback
associated with the use of technology, I am of the opinion that automation has greatly improved our lives in the area of giving ease and pace to learning and quicker household chores completion. Fix the agreement mistake
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Therefore
, the government should ensure technology is made available for all and sundry in the country.Linking Words
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task response
Ensure that every point made in the essay directly relates to the topic and clearly agrees or disagrees with the statement given in the prompt. Include a clear thesis statement in the introduction to clearly state your position.
coherence cohesion
Improve the use of transition words and phrases to better connect ideas within and between paragraphs. Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that relates to the main idea of the essay.