In recent years,more and more people tend to live individually.What are the causes of this trend?Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?
In
this
day and age, there is an increasing number of people
who have a tendency to live more for themselves. while there are many reasons to explain this
phenomenon, I believe that can lead to an incredibly negative impact on our society.
Firstly
, this
trend can be influenced by the fact that living expenses are much higher than they were in the past which can lead to debt or some financial problems for many individuals. Because of that, people
especially young millenials
have to work more hours until night to pay back these debts. Change the capitalization
Millenials
millennials
As a result
, the more stressful they are, the least motivation for them
Correct pronoun usage
they
to
look after other lives. Add a missing verb
have to
Moreover
, due to the development of the internet, people
are no longer need to communicate to
other Change preposition
with
people
while they can entertain themselves by Youtube or Tiktok. This
lack of communication can lead to the
selfishnessCorrect article usage
apply
,
because they do not realize the importance of living for other Remove the comma
apply
people
.
However
, there are some drawbacks of this
phenomenon that we should noticed
. Change the verb form
notice
First
of all, the person who are
likely to live for themselves which means they do not have any social responsibility. Change the verb form
is
For instance
, they do not want to take part in voluntary activities and some other social activities. Moreover
, they assumed that these social problems are down to the government, and they no need to be a part to solve it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
As a result
, our earth is abandoned to be harmed everyday
.
In conclusion, there are many Replace the word
every day
people
believe
that they should choose to live individually, Correct pronoun usage
who believe
however
Add a comma
,however
this
could lead to an enormous disadvantages
to our society. It can be predicted that, if we do not take any Correct the article-noun agreement
enormous disadvantages
an enormous disadvantage
further
actions, there can be various problems to our society from environmental to social issues.Submitted by sonlamtrandai on
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