Some people think that listening to music can be a useful way to improve the efficiency, but others believe that music distracts from daily routine. Give your opinion to this statement.
As it is claimed by a proportion, listening to
music
may play a critical role to enhance effectiveness. While other
have contradictory viewpoints, day-to-day activities in a spectrum of ways. Both claims have partial views and numerous reasons. Correct pronoun usage
others
However
, I mostly mingle with the former.
It is not a misunderstanding that music
may accelerate our inner effectivity because it may have altruistic hedonism value and this
may also
have pro-social behaviour and intellectual virtues. For instance
, most women are working when they are tolistening
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listening
to listening
music
due to Change preposition
to music
reduce
their internal aggression. Change the verb form
reducing
Hence
, listening to music
may identify as medicine to defeating those negative emotional behaviours. Furthermore
, music
may act as effective.
In contrast
, others assert paradoxical claims, no doubt to some are addicting to listen
Add the preposition
tolisten
music
. There are no restrictions on it. This
may physically, socially, mentally affect us. So, owing to various social and personal considerations sometimes I hold the pessimistic view of this
statement because listening is the best addiction for those who have suffered any mental conditions. For example
, when crossing a road, people may use earplugs which may defeat any background noise due to the high volume of music
then
it would be an accident in light of music
addiction, they may not be alert to the surrounding area. Hence
, it is readily apparent that this
development may pose a huge threat to human beings.
In conclusion, addiction to music
may perpetuate different positive conditions such
as defeat loneliness and dull mood as well as it may pose enormous catastrophe for all human beings and the society due to the lack of alertness.Submitted by Sandu on
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