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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is an argument between whether we need to
share
 much
information
 or not. Some people think that it is good to
share
 as much
information
 as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world and others think that some
information
 is too valuable to be shared freely. I completely believe that each method could have pros and cons. On the one hand, some people think that we need to
share
 more
information
 to promote technological progress.
For example
, each technological production is created need many scientists to cooperate and to
share
 their own
information
 with each other.
Besides
, it is important to
share
information
 in education. Because every academic question needs to be discussed by teachers and students only in
this
 way we could make great progress.
On the other hand
, not all the
information
 need to be shared.
For example
, some writers may speed much time and pay more attention to
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 one article. If they
share
 their achievement with others they can not gain their reward.
Moreover
, there is some
information
such
 as business and government secrets
that is
 too important to be shared. Because
if
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 the bad guys get the important
information
 of the countries, their countries people’s safe can’t be protected. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think it is not essential that all
information
 be available to the public. We need to resolute which
information
 should be shared and which shouldn’t.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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