Human activities have negative effects on o plant and animal species. Some human activities have negative effects on Plant and animal species, some people think it is too late to do anything about this Problem. others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, several
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do a lot of activities and create a negative impact on plants and animal
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. Some segments of society reckon that it is already too late to take any steps to tackle
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problem;
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, counterparts of the society insist that
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effective solutions should take to tackle
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situation. There are split opinions regarding
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topic, though both have their pros and cons as per everyone's perspective.
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, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed. To embark on, there is no doubt for some
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who think that we can not do anything to resolve
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problem in
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cut-throat competitive business world. Because they believe that many
species
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of plants and
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have already disappeared from our world and it is impossible to get back them. If we try to acquire them or strive to protect them, luxury facilities will be reduced and
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would be difficult for
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to live in
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fast-moving world.
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, in 2013 various studies conducted in the USA found that several
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disappeared from our ecosystem because of deforestation in order to give
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range of
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to
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society
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, in
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situation, it is better to do nothing to reverse the problem. Why everyone should take corrective measures to curb
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negative effects? The underlying reason behind
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is that if we do not take care
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environment
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it would be more critical in the future so the government should impose some rules and regulation on
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as if anyone causes harm or kill
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, he/she should be penalized.
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, they should ban
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plastic
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as it is more dangerous to
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,
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should
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to plant trees
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their homes as it is not only
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to save extinct
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but
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would help to protect our environment. The more liable
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the plants and
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, the better life would be. In conclusion, there is still time to take the initiative to protect ourselves as well as protect our environment by doing a lot of activities.
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why I would say that
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we can not reverse the damages, we can stop
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damage which is being done by humans.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • extinction
  • reforestation
  • conservation programs
  • environmental laws
  • ecosystems
  • technological advances
  • awareness
  • interconnectivity
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • preserving
  • wildlife
  • mitigate
  • empowering
  • economic and social benefits
  • incentives
  • conservation efforts
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