Human activities have negative effects on o plant and animal species. Some human activities have negative effects on Plant and animal species, some people think it is too late to do anything about this Problem. others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, several
people
do a lot of activities and create a negative impact on plants and animal
species
. Some segments of society reckon that it is already too late to take any steps to tackle
this
problem;
however
, counterparts of the society insist that
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effective solutions should take to tackle
this
situation. There are split opinions regarding
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this
topic, though both have their pros and cons as per everyone's perspective.
Therefore
, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed. To embark on, there is no doubt for some
people
who think that we can not do anything to resolve
this
problem in
this
cut-throat competitive business world. Because they believe that many
species
of plants and
animals
have already disappeared from our world and it is impossible to get back them. If we try to acquire them or strive to protect them, luxury facilities will be reduced and
this
would be difficult for
people
to live in
this
fast-moving world.
for example
, in 2013 various studies conducted in the USA found that several
species
disappeared from our ecosystem because of deforestation in order to give
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to
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society
Thus
, in
this
situation, it is better to do nothing to reverse the problem. Why everyone should take corrective measures to curb
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negative effects? The underlying reason behind
this
is that if we do not take care
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environment
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then
it would be more critical in the future so the government should impose some rules and regulation on
such
as if anyone causes harm or kill
animals
, he/she should be penalized.
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, they should ban
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plastic
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as it is more dangerous to
animals
,
people
should
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to plant trees
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their homes as it is not only
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to save extinct
species
but
also
would help to protect our environment. The more liable
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the plants and
animals
, the better life would be. In conclusion, there is still time to take the initiative to protect ourselves as well as protect our environment by doing a lot of activities.
That is
why I would say that
although
we can not reverse the damages, we can stop
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damage which is being done by humans.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • extinction
  • reforestation
  • conservation programs
  • environmental laws
  • ecosystems
  • technological advances
  • awareness
  • interconnectivity
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • preserving
  • wildlife
  • mitigate
  • empowering
  • economic and social benefits
  • incentives
  • conservation efforts
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