People today sleep less and less. What are causes of this? Do you think this is a positive development?
Over the years, sleeping patterns have changed for many
people
. There are different reasons for this
phenomenon, such
as the excessive use of mobile phones or chronic stress only to mention a few. In my point of view, this
can have a detrimental impact on people
's life.
Firstly
, having an irregular sleeping routine or not having enough sleep at all is becoming more common among people
. One of the main reasons of
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for
this
change might be the unlimited use of technological devices, which it
is clearly seen in Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
of all ages. For instance
, when screen light reflects into the eyes during night time, this
can make people
stay awake longer, so therefore
, Add the comma(s)
,therefore
less
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fewer
hours
of sleep. Secondly
, if stress is constantly suffered
, it is Wrong verb form
suffering
higly
likely that Correct your spelling
highly
people
is
unable to sleep for eight Change the verb form
are
hours
. Having said this
, people
should reflect on the long term consequences of this
concerning phenomenon.
Considering all mentioned above, I believe that this
can bring serious health issues to individuals. In short, having less
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fewer
hours
of sleep can lead to numerous diseases and affect badly the nervous system in a very short period of time. For example
, when sleeping less than 6 hours
a day, the human body feels Change the verb form
fatigued
fatigue
and unable to function properly, even one can lose memory.
In conclusion, if Correct your spelling
fatigued
people
do not sleep the minimun
Correct your spelling
minimum
hours
, the nervious
system and the cells start to damage significantly. Correct your spelling
nervous
Although
,
many Remove the comma
apply
people
can claim that they can function easily with five or six hours
a day only, it is my opinion that this
has a terrible consequence to
one's health in the long term.Change preposition
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