People today sleep less and less. What are causes of this? Do you think this is a positive development?

Over the years, sleeping patterns have changed for many
people
. There are different reasons for
this
phenomenon,
such
as the excessive use of mobile phones or chronic stress only to mention a few. In my point of view,
this
can have a detrimental impact on
people
's life. 
Firstly
, having an irregular sleeping routine or not having enough sleep at all is becoming more common among
people
. One of the main reasons
of
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this
change might be the unlimited use of technological devices, which
it
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is clearly seen in
people
of all ages.
For instance
, when screen light reflects into the eyes during night time,
this
can make
people
stay awake longer, so
therefore
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,
less
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fewer
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hours
of sleep.
Secondly
, if stress is constantly
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, it is
higly
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highly
likely that
people
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unable to sleep for eight
hours
. Having said
this
,
people
should reflect on the long term consequences of
this
concerning phenomenon. Considering all mentioned above, I believe that
this
can bring serious health issues to individuals. In short, having
less
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hours
of sleep can lead to numerous diseases and affect badly the nervous system in a very short period of time.
For example
, when sleeping less than 6
hours
a day, the human body feels
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fatigue
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and unable to function properly, even one can lose memory. In conclusion, if
people
do not sleep the
minimun
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minimum
hours
, the
nervious
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nervous
system and the cells start to damage significantly.
Although
,
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many
people
can claim that they can function easily with five or six
hours
a day only, it is my opinion that
this
has a terrible consequence
to
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one's health in the long term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instant gratification
  • rapid advancement
  • instant communication
  • online shopping
  • fast food delivery
  • social media platforms
  • immediate feedback
  • recognition and validation
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • convenience
  • decreased patience
  • delayed gratification
  • realistic expectations
  • work ethic
  • unrealistic expectations
  • stress
  • dissatisfaction
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