Some people think hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors suchas money and good appearance are more important.
society have different views about hard study and revenge bringing good luck. Other public thinks wealth and beauty are more significant. In my view, both sides are necessary for
this
growth.
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To begin
with, many nations think hard work and dedication take achievement. If the population practise more and more, they will achieve definitely. Linking Words
Firstly
, everybody needs self-esteem due to attain their dreams. The world has a lot of successful societies,Linking Words
for instance
, Elon Musk, Jack Ma, Steve Jobs and Linking Words
also
Bill Gates. All of them as possible and simple family Linking Words
however
they worked hard and strive to achieve their goals. Intelligent individuals always become successful and they have many enemies so they have the best word which is the best revenge is massive success. Linking Words
As a result
, they continue their occupation and profession.
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On the other hand
, some populations consider that heart consists of finance and a perfect appearance. If nations have enough money , they will have opportunities and beautiful growth. In the world, well-known universities have many students which are rich community children. Linking Words
For instance
, foreign universities Harward, Cambridge, Oxford and Linking Words
also
Inha. I believe in Linking Words
this
fact which is crowd love a stunning person without a doubt. They don't think and are interested in their behaviour, beauty is enough for them. Linking Words
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is heart truth with the result that it is an unchangeable reality.
To sum up, I would argue that the best way to achieve and bring success which is hard work without wasting time and sleeping talent.Linking Words
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