The charts below give information about world spending and population.

The charts below give information about world spending and population.
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The pie charts compare the shares of four major items in global expenditure,
as well as
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how the global community is distributed.
Overall
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, the largest proportion of money in the world is allocated to food,
while
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transport, housing and clothing are other significant items.
Moreover
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, the public of Asia is responsible for the largest group of humans.
According to
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the first chart, the most significant amounts are paid for food (almost a quarter of global expenditure) and transport (almost 20%),
while
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housing
also
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accounts for a considerable proportion. The least among the four is spent on clothing (merely 6 per cent) and the remaining 40% is spent on a variety of other items. The
second
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chart shows that there is a significant difference between the populaces of Asia and that of other continents since approximately 3 out of every 5 human beings live in Asia. Europe and the Americas share similar proportions and together are host to roughly one-
third
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of the world’s people,
while
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the inhabitants of Africa form a mere one-tenth.
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