You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:  explain what you like about his new house  tell what you enjoyed most during your staying  Suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear Karan, I am really grateful to you for recently giving me the best

time

in your home . It's really unforgettable memories for me.

Last

week I spent a good

time

with you and in your new house, if I am not working I really stay with you because I like hospitality from your family and they are very kind heart people and your home is located in a good society. They are good views can see from your room in the morning

time

. I really enjoyed the homemade food which was prepared by your mother. It's really Indian traditional taste. I want to have that type of meal every day which is more healthy. I want to suggest that now you and your family can come to my town because

month the summer holidays will going to start. You can plan to visit me. we can spend again quality

time

with each other again . See you soon Yours lovingly Sunita

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