Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the rises of modern technologies and human activities have a deep impact on environmental pollution. As
such
, many said it is the major issue which causes in decreasing number of
animals
and vegetations; and others disagree with it. In
this
essay, I will discuss both statements and provide examples of both opinions.
First
of all, it is true as above mentioned, humans increasingly destroying lands by polluting them with waste. People tend to throw garbage into the woods out of convenience.
In addition
, as we expand our territories we are
further
damaging and destroying their natural habitats. As the result, many specific species and
plants
are being eliminated.
For instance
, factories need large land to build on; to meet the requirement, levelling the forest will be optimal. As
such
, it leads to a huge amount of
animals
becoming homeless, as well as the vegetation
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destroyed.
Nevertheless
, while caring about species and
plants
, some believe there is much important environmental issue that needs to take upon.
Although
the above-mentioned argument seems persuasive in some cases, I disagree with
this
statement to a larger extent.
Animals
and
plants
can help the environment to become healthier as they are nature purifiers. Take
plants
,
for instance
, they absorb carbon dioxide and releases oxygen, which it will purify in its system. As well as
animals
they can maintain the food chain in a balanced cycle. In conclusion, people believe other major environmental issues need to be resolved, compare to
animals
and
plants
. To
this
extent, the statement is somewhat true.
However
, the statement is incorrect as
animals
and
plants
act as an important role and major purifier to pollution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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