You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

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Respected Sir, I'm writing to ask you to make the appropriate arrangements for our three-night stay at your resort from March 23rd to March 26th. I'd like to make a reservation for a duplex room on the upper level with a view of the beach, as

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will be more convenient for our family of three.

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, could you

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check if the pricing includes breakfast for the duration of our stay at your hotel?

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, I'd appreciate it if you could share more information about it. Will you be able to organize a

day-tour

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that covers the majority of the sights while we are there on vacation? Is there any kind of event for kids at your

inn

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as a bonfire, entertainment, and games? If

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the case, I would appreciate it if you could let us know the time and sort of activity ahead of time so that we can plan our journey

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, are there any tourist attractions closer to the resort where we may

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use of in-house transportation? I really anticipate hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Obbu Raga Sai Nithisha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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