You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

Respected Sir, I'm writing to ask you to make the appropriate arrangements for our three-night stay at your resort from March 23rd to March 26th. I'd like to make a reservation for a duplex room on the upper level with a view of the beach, as
this
will be more convenient for our family of three.
Furthermore
, could you
also
check if the pricing includes breakfast for the duration of our stay at your hotel?
Also
, I'd appreciate it if you could share more information about it. Will you be able to organize a
day-tour
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that covers the majority of the sights while we are there on vacation? Is there any kind of event for kids at your
inn
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,
such
as a bonfire, entertainment, and games? If
that is
the case, I would appreciate it if you could let us know the time and sort of activity ahead of time so that we can plan our journey
accordingly
.
Finally
, are there any tourist attractions closer to the resort where we may
take
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use of in-house transportation? I really anticipate hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Obbu Raga Sai Nithisha
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