Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?
Good morning, everyone, and thank you all for coming to listen to me today. Before we start, let me ask you a question
first
. How many of you think that we should establish a school
council
in our school
? Today, I am going to talk about school
Correct article usage
the school
council
. For the start, I am going to present its advantages, then
disadvantages and my own opinion at the end.
First
of all, the advantage of the school
council
is that it gives students
the chance to actively participle in changing their school
environment. I have read about a study recently, which states if the school
places the involvement of their students
at heart, then
the benefits and opportunities for both the students
and the school
are significantly increased. Also
, a school
council
motivate students
to make a difference by inviting them shape
their future Add the particle
to shape
school
life, as they have been given the chance to present their views, by using their own voices to express their needs and concerns. For example
, a curriculum that is
not solely developed by the teacher but also
with the students
can motivate them to learn.
However
, some people argue that there are also
disadvantages of establishing a school
council
and their main argument is that the council
is a waste of time. The students
often have the feeling that they have a say but, in the end, nothing really happens. Personally, I think that it is not really the problem of the council
or of the students
, but the teachers. As it is teachers’ job to report the problems to each other and not just ignore them. To avoid this
kind thing
to happen, I think that the involvement should not just be lip service but should Change preposition
of thing
also
include action. Both form the students
and the teachers.
To conclude, I think that the establishing
of a Replace the word
establishment
school
council
bring more good than harm on
the Change preposition
to
students
. However
, the council
and the students
’ Correct your spelling
advice
advices
should Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
also
be taken seriously by the teachers and the council
should be a way to encourage the students
to become involved in changing the school
, not discouraging them from this
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