Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

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Good morning, everyone, and thank you all for coming to listen to me today. Before we start, let me ask you a question
first
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. How many of you think that we should establish a
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council
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in our
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? Today, I am going to talk about
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council
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. For the start, I am going to present its advantages,
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disadvantages and my own opinion at the end.
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of all, the advantage of the
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council
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is that it gives
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the chance to actively participle in changing their
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environment. I have read about a study recently, which states if the
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places the involvement of their
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at heart,
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the benefits and opportunities for both the
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and the
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are significantly increased.
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, a
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council
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motivate
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to make a difference by inviting them
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their future
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life, as they have been given the chance to present their views, by using their own voices to express their needs and concerns.
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, a curriculum
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not solely developed by the teacher but
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with the
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can motivate them to learn.
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, some people argue that there are
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disadvantages of establishing a
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council
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and their main argument is that the
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is a waste of time. The
students
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often have the feeling that they have a say but, in the end, nothing really happens. Personally, I think that it is not really the problem of the
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or of the
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, but the teachers. As it is teachers’ job to report the problems to each other and not just ignore them. To avoid
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to happen, I think that the involvement should not just be lip service but should
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include action. Both form the
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and the teachers. To conclude, I think that the
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of a
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council
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bring more good than harm
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the
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.
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, the
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and the
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advice
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should
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be taken seriously by the teachers and the
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should be a way to encourage the
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to become involved in changing the
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, not discouraging them from
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