what is the academic performance,Future planning,Reasons for postgraduate entrance examination

Academic performance: I majored in
Sports
Economics and Management at the
Shanghai
University of Sport as an undergraduate student. During the college, I had excellent grades, with a GPA of xx, ranking in the top 10 in the major. And obtain school scholarships for many times, I am
also
an outstanding graduate of the school.
Although
I am a cross-student, I have been exposed to
sports
since I was a child and have received semi-professional
tennis
training. I have won the singles runner-up in the
tennis
event of the Yunnan Provincial Games. Work
experience
: After graduation, I have been engaged in
tennis
-related work. With three years of
experience
in event planning and operation, I am responsible for the promotion of the company's
tennis
events, and follow up and execute more than 50 events . These experiences have improved my practical ability to a certain extent and accumulated a certain amount of practical
experience
of / in my future graduate studies . Future planning : If I am admitted to
this
university , I will be strict with myself . In the
first
year , I will devote all my time for / of academic study , read and thought more . During the
second
year , I will apply the theory to practice , actively participated in social practice , thought about the topic selection of the graduation thesis , and wrote the opening report ; during the
third
year , I will complete the graduation thesis . At the same time, I must learn English well , and hope to be able to read foreign literature by myself . Reasons for postgraduate entrance examination: My previous work
experience
in my workplace and the
Shanghai
Tennis
Association has given me a full understanding of the current situation of the
tennis
industry in
Shanghai
. Whether it is competitions, social clubs or the popularization and development of campus
tennis
,
Shanghai
is at the forefront of the country . Feeling inadequate professionally. Education affects all aspects of everyone's life.
Sports
is an important part of education.
Sports
is not only a means of imparting skills and physical fitness, but
also
a means of promoting all-round development of people .
This
experience
strengthened my determination to engage in physical education . If I have the opportunity , I hope to study these issues in more depth of my future studies in school .
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