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Some people think that planning for the future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is argued that spending
time
 preparing for the
future
 is a waste of
time
. They think that focusing on the present is more important. From my perspective, I agree that we should focus on the present rather than preparing for the
future
. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people often plan for the
future
.
Firstly
, if we have a plan for the
future
, we will be more successful and it will decrease
time
 in our thinking.
Secondly
, we can set a goal and try hard to achieve it, the possibility of the reach them grows significantly.
Finally
, you spent less
time
 planning and analyzing because you are pre-establish. You are only spending your
time
 trying to reach the goal that I have planned in advance.
On the other hand
, I believe that we should think about the present rather than the
future
.
To begin
 with, focusing on the present
also
 helps an individual calm their minds, which helps them
finally
 to use their
time
 more efficiently.
As a result
, it has a direct effect on the
future
. If you are too focused on the
future
, you may not make very good decisions about your present life.
Therefore
 we should try our best in the present
instead
 of worrying about the
future
. In conclusion,
although
 it is necessary to make plans in order to achieve goals and succeed in the
future
, it seems to me that we must pay more attention to the present rather than wasting
time
 planning for the
future
.
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