Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits has been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
globalization era where the country
border-line seems blurred, every nation is well connected. Change noun form
country's
Therefore
, international cooperation is managed to work together on tackling global challenges, such
as environmental protection
. Meanwhile, some believe that the only benefit from such
collaboration is for
economic growth. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will explore now.
On the one hand, to cope Change preposition
apply
environmental
Change preposition
with environmental
protection
issues that happen worldwide, the supports
from Fix the agreement mistake
support
international
collaboration will be extremely beneficial to address. Add an article
the international
For instance
, The Paris Agreement, a legally binding international treaty on climate change held in 2016, encouraged over 170 parties to reduce greenhouse gas emissions. In addition
, through this
cooperation, close to 30 countries have jointly pledged US$4.1 billion to safeguard the world’s forests, build green cities, protect threatened wildlife, and cope marine
plastic pollution. Change preposition
with marine
Hence
, the aim to limit global warming to well below 2 °C is highly possible to achieve in the near future by such
collaboration.
On the other hand
, people who are opposing the view believe that cross-border cooperation is contributed more to the international market boom rather than environmental protection
. One salient example of this
is Freeport-McMoRan, the biggest company of copper and gold worldwide, apparently enjoy
the fruits of its exploitation of Papua Island. The indigenous tribes claim their communities have been racked with poverty, disease, oppression and habitual degradation since the mine began operations in 1973. Wrong verb form
enjoying
Thus
, it can be clearly seen that multinational business
primarily target to earn Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
huge
profit than contribute to Add an article
a huge
improve
the environment.
To sum up, I firmly believe that mutual effort among different nations has benefited with the business level which is far greater than the environment Change the verb form
improving
protection
. Therefore
, there should be stricter law
and rules to regulate Fix the agreement mistake
laws
company’s
activities to avoid the larger devastating effect on natural surroundings.Correct article usage
a company’s
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