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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #wiil #newspapers #books
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Near future, everyone will not purchase scaring newspapers and
books
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,
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, they could be reading that on the
internet
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. And
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 providing for free. In my opinion, I agree that reading newspapers or
books
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 on the
internet
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.
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, I
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 believe
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 good for the environment and effective in timing use. Nowadays, the internets are very convenient and the most popular. Most
people
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 like to get information and news through the
internet
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 during office and home
time
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. The research of Hong Kong University said that
people
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 were spending over 10 hours a day.
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 as reading newspapers, magazines,
books
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 or social media to get information from different platforms, there are easily and effectively.
People
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 can save their
time
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 because they don’t need to go to real shops. In the past,
people
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 used paper for printing which was a serious problem to damage the environment, the TV programme reported that was over million trees fell in the year. That was a major influence on forests and animals. Most animals were lost their habitat to survive and faced a crisis of extinction. Another research by the environment protecting association said that the annual result of printing industries was decreasing in 15 years. The paper is getting useless in
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 period.
People
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 would be changed their reading habits online. In recent years, I used the
internet
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 every day which is convenient for me and save money. Because I just pay a little for a membership fee that I can watch different kinds of
books
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 during my
time
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. Sometimes I like to watch the news from foreign websites it let me know what happened in the world.
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, for the eyes healthy, I do not recommend that using a long
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 in the computer, we could take a break between each hour for rest.
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