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You are taking a course at a local college .The deadline for your project was last week but you have finished it. write a letter to your lecturer in your letter: . introduce yourself .explain why you haven't handed in the project yet. .request more about to do it.

#course #college #deadline #project #week #lecturer #haven #request
Hello Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to request you for need more time to complete my
project
. My name is Manpreet Kaur. I am studying
in
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at
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college
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College
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 in
science
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the science
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 department.
Last
 week you gave us
project
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a project
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 related to biology. I know
this
 is the final
project
 and it is very important to complete because my
overall
 number
based
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is based
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 on
this
project
.
Due to
 some
emergency
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emergency,
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 I did not complete
this
 task because my mother was in the hospital. So, I was there taking care of my mother . She has
brain
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a brain
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tumor
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this
 time is very difficult for our family. I request you need some extra time to finish
this
 task. I need two more days. I will submit my
project
 in two days. I hope you understand my situation and think about my request . I am waiting for your response .
Your
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 sincerely, Manpreet Kaur.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a clear introduction, an explanation of the situation, and a polite request. The current structure could be improved.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use more varied sentence structures and paragraphing to organize the content better, focusing on one idea per paragraph.
Task Achievement
For a higher score, your response needs to address all parts of the task with more developments. This includes introducing yourself with relevant details, explaining the situation comprehensively, and making your request very clear.
Task Achievement
Adopt a more consistent formal tone throughout your letter appropriate for academic correspondence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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