Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modern building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Maintenance and reparation of old
buildings
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have been an issue that governments have allocated a budget to it. While there is an argument that these
buildings
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should be replaced by modern ones, I believe that it is a two-sided sword and depends on the value On the one hand, tearing down an edifice may have two main drawbacks.
Firstly
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,
this
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would result in a huge amount of wasted embodied
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.
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energy
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has been consumed by factories to make building
materials
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such
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as concrete, brick or cement.
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, if a building knocks down without any recycling, the new material should be made from the raw
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which result in a big number of disposals.
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, some of these old
buildings
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are tourist attractions. Many people are fond of historical structures, especially if they are built in a specific era and architecture.
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, if governments invest in maintaining and repairing these
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, the expenditure will pay back by increasing the numbers of tourists over time.
On the other hand
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, replacing these
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with new modern ones would positively affect building
energy
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consumption reduction and safety. Many
materials
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have been developing in recent years.
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, Low-E glass could reduce heat transfer simultaneously with allowing daylight penetration that
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reduces cooling and lighting
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consumption.
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, these
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have become safer in the case of natural disasters
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as earthquakes and fires. Constructing with light pre-fabricated
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not only decreases the building weight in the case of seismic but
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accelerates the construction process. In conclusion, pulling down an old building or paying for maintenance is likely to depend on the building's value and in my opinion, both of these options could be favourable.
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