Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.

To some people,
homework
is very helpful for
students
, while for others is not adequate. In
this
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I will explain why I believe that
teachers
should not let
homework
, or if they let it, it must be carefully planned. Some people believe that
teachers
should let
homework
for their
student
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because some
students
should not spend too much
time
studying
besides
of their school and
also
because
students
could become
stressful
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.
For example
, I experienced
homework
as a difficult thing because I used to do extracurricular activities,
such
as sports or studying languages, as a consequence I had no
time
to do my
homework
and become
stressful
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. I believe that
this
could be detrimental to
students
' mental health, whether they do not learn to manage their
time
. Others believe that
homework
is highly beneficial for
students
because
this
helps them to develop their academic skills and
this
could help them to develop values
such
as responsibility and perseverance.
For example
, there was a student who was not aware
about
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responsibility and he failed his academic year,
however
, he tried to study more and tried to do every
homework
given
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, which help him to understand the value of
the
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responsibility. I think that
homework
could be given carefully to
students
in order to take care of their mental health and one of the solutions could be that
teachers
could let
homework
in class which in turn it would save
time
for both. Whether or not
homework
could be beneficial for
students
to develop skills and values,
this
could be extremely detrimental to their mental health if they do not know how to manage their
time
. I believe that
teachers
should develop
students
in class, and
homework
should be made it there.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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