In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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traveling
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travelling
people
like to consider Use synonyms
purshasing
as a hobby rather than a daily work. In my own opinion, it is a positive trend. Correct your spelling
purchasing
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can probably improve the relationship between families and friends, and the changed shopping style will reduce the waste to a certain degree. Linking Words
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the reasons.
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makes
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make
people
feel happy and they Use synonyms
also
like to invite others to go shopping together. Linking Words
For example
, women may make an appointment to go to Costco together; and during the wandering time, they would like to have a cup of coffee to increase their good relationships. Linking Words
However
, if they all have their own routine time, they can hardly sit together to have a warm conversation. Linking Words
As a result
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new purchasing experience not only can finish the daily jobLinking Words
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also
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impove
their life quality and become Correct your spelling
improve
more nice
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nicer
people
around.
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Secondaly
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people
may buy goods Use synonyms
wth
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with
higer
quality and Correct your spelling
higher
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lower
loser
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lower
price
if they do the shopping as a hobby since they are willing to spend more time Fix the agreement mistake
prices
on
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apply
on
them. For Change preposition
apply
a
instance, girls would like to compare the prices and Correct article usage
apply
qulities
around several shops for a specific dress. Correct your spelling
qualities
Therefore
, they may get a perfect experience and get the exact goods they like. Linking Words
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In
a
conclusion, it is clear that Correct article usage
apply
people
could spend less money on their life and even get better Use synonyms
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lives
life
lifes
with these new hobbies, Correct your spelling
lives
instead
of considering Linking Words
as
a job.
In conclusion, with the reasons talked above, Correct pronoun usage
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the
good relationships and better life qualities can be seen as Correct article usage
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main
reasons for Correct article usage
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argument that it is a positive trend that Linking Words
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shopping activities as hobbies rather than routine jobs.Change the verb form
considers
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