Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, people think that the earlier
children
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chance
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to learn a foreign
language
, the better competency level they would have. Personally, I am inclined to
this
notion and believe that students who learn different
languages
since primary school would get more advantages.
First
and foremost, one evident advantage to students who
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good communication is the possibility
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oversea job opportunities due to the better
language
usage is as good as natives. Experiencing since primary school will force
children
to learn, experience and get used to that
language
as their mother tongue.
For instance
, the Thai and United Kingdom joint venture company,
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in England, is hiring Thai candidates and stated in job descriptions for those who can use both
languages
effectively will be a special case to consider.
As a result
, the majority of fresh graduate students who have been hired are those who can speak English fluently.
However
,
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drawback for
children
studying different
languages
can cause confusion and
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they would not be able to keep up with
any
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languages
.
In other words
, their brains would be mixed up and they would not be able to pronounce any words correctly which obviously can affect
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later life. According
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survey reported that
children
aged under 5 should learn the
language
their parents have been spoken
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before letting them acquire
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language
.
Otherwise
, 80% of
children
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capabilities to absorb
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of
languages
will reflect
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children
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lack of communication skills. In conclusion, I would reiterate
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the advantages
learning
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languages
since
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key stage would prevail over the drawbacks in terms of better job opportunities and
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of getting hired.
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  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
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