You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am Vijaya, recently moved into your
next
flat. I am actually planning to throw a party
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my near and dear. I am worried that it may cause disturbance to you and other neighbours. So
i
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am writing
this
letter to you. Please bear with me. Now
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will let you know about the party and how it will be organised. It includes all types of alcohol, beverages, desserts, dinner ( all varieties of vegetarian and non-vegetarian) with starters. It
also
will have
DJ
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in loud and
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a dance floor. Interested couples and singles will enjoy dancing. I cordially invite you to come and grace me with your presence. It will be very fun. You can meet my family and friends. I think
this
will be a good platform
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both of us to know each other.
Now a days
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social gatherings are
must
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to interact and
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attending these parties will make us more adaptable to socialize with
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society. Yours sincerely, Vijaya Madamanchi.
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