The maps show the changes of Bill Hill Farm in 1976 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.
Given maps illustrate the evolution of
Environmental
Centre from Bill Hill Correct article usage
the Environmental
Farm
during
3 decades. Change preposition
over
Overall
, it is clear that
radical transformations occured
in the Correct your spelling
occurred
occur
farm
over the period and it was totally converted into an environmental centre.
In 1976, Farmyard was situated in the heart of Farm
. Correct article usage
the Farm
In
the top of it was Barn, Change preposition
On
to
the right side of Correct word choice
and to
this
facility
there was Add a comma
,facility
the
shed in order to keep cows. In the vicinity of Correct article usage
a
shed
located Chicken Correct article usage
the shed
Farm
. Add an article
The farm
Farm house
was laid out on the bottom of Correct your spelling
Farmhouse
Farmyard
. Correct article usage
the Farmyard
Finally
, there was special storage for farm
machines in
the left side Change preposition
on
in
the top.
When it comes Environmental centre storage was replaced with parking. Change preposition
at
Multimedia
room was opened Correct article usage
A Multimedia
instead
of old
barn facility. Previous sheds gave their place to student hosting. Correct article usage
the old
Recreational
area for Correct article usage
A recreational
intertainment
was created in the Correct your spelling
entertainment
center
. Only Change the spelling
centre
Correct article usage
the farmhouse
farmhouse
did not see any exchanges over the period.Fix the agreement mistake
farmhouses
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words farm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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