In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

Humankind has progressed a lot in the agricultural sector. While these improvements are clear, some people are still suffering from hunger.
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solutions for it.
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cause of
this
unfortunate situation is that
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nation
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can not take the advantage of these developments in agriculture. To explain, it is surely hard to afford all those technological devices in agriculture for fairly poorer
countries
.
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,
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will
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behind the developed
nations
.
In addition
to
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, Some developed
countries
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their power and prestige in order to exploit poor
nations
by using their land for farming and
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the habitants of those lands to work in farms.
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those
nations
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up working for other developed
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harvests and struggling hunger for sure. Despite these issues, there are
also
strong solutions to fix
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.
To begin
with, policymakers and power owners should gather and discuss the ways in reinforcing these underdeveloped
nations
. To explain, those powerful governments can provide funds,
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, and agricultural education to other
nations
by means of helping them to develop and perform their own harvest. Another solution would be
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inhibiting the exploitation of poor lands.
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can be done by calling exploitation
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a global crime. As a consequence of
this
action, habitants of an exploited land can start using their own farms to harvest. In conclusion,
agricultural
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business has advanced a lot,
however
, many people
are keep
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having
troubles
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trouble
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with hunger. Poor and exploited
nations
are the major sufferers of
this
issue and big
countries
should take action to provide equal food for each nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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