At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, Certain nations have a higher proportion of youths as opposed to elderly
ones
in their total number of citizens. This
essay will discuss why the benefit of having more numbers of younger ones
results in increased strength
and overshadows the negative that comes from the lack of experience
.
One plus point of a country
having more younger people is that they bring more strength
to it. Unlike the old and frail people who can not perform manual work, the younger generation is capable of engaging in the most physically demanding work This
leads to increased production in a country
as many physical activities are dealt with without a challenge. For example
, in the Copperbelt province of Zambia, the mining sector was able to up their annual productions due to the fact that they had more of the fresh blood in the country
. This
shows the goodness that results from having more young adults as compared with older ones
.
However
, this
comes with the disadvantage of a lack of experience
in carrying out tasks. To put this
in perspective, even though younger people may be stronger than their older counterparts, certain types of jobs calls for experience
and not strength
. Take, for instance
, in the medical field where very little has to do with strength
but experience
comes in handy. A better performing Doctor will be the one with more experience
, one who has been practising for longer periods. Therefore
, a nation could be lacking when it comes to the precision that certain careers demand. Despite that, I believe this
could be overcome by ensuring that all the graduates are monitored and assisted by their tutors as they practice.
By way of conclusion, youths being more in numbers than older ones
has some positive influence in a country
including increased strength
even if they might lack job experience
which can be resolved through extended guidance. This
is why I believe the advantages outweigh and drawbacks.Submitted by rawlingskatongo89 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite