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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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In these decades, there are many education systems, that have been developed for
students
' satisfaction and more suitable learning programmes. The
assignment
 is one of the mandatory assessments that pupils might feel unfavourable if thy are improper and overloaded.
As a result
, there were some arguments about
this
 issue that has been discussed for a long period. In
this
 essay, the effects of
school
 assignments or
homework
 will be clarified in each issue. There are some improvements in
school
 curriculums for increasing learning performances and course evaluation.
First
 of all, the most important role of
homework
 is to increase the
students
' skills and teach more theories through each
school
 module. Another reason for the
assignment
 is to enhance cognitive thinking
that is
 related to problem-based learning and finding solutions. A
further
 benefit of
homework
 is relevant to
students
' responsibility which they could show to their teachers and it is the indirect lesson of respect to the rules and regulations.
However
, there are some drawbacks to massive assignments. The
students
 probably do not have time to spend with their friends after they finish
school
.
Then
, the fatigue working can lead to indifferent behaviour when they became more mature.
Therefore
, the inspiration of
students
 in
school
-aged groups might be limited and the learning curve might dramatically decrease because they did not concentrate on learning and it was overused. In conclusion, the role of
assignment
 is essential for
school
 curriculum measurement, according to the education system is necessary to be comparable and benchmarking.
Nevertheless
, from my point of view, the tutors or
school
 teachers should provide the proper quantity of
homework
 and explain to them the reason and goals of the
assignment
 clearly,
therefore
 the
students
 could understand and focus on what they need to learn, and they are willing to finish their
homework
 without any reluctance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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