You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am Hafiz Mahmood Hussain, working as a project manager in Stelogix Technologies, Sialkot Pakistan. I saw an advertisement about the seminar on advanced programming languages, that will be arranged by your company in India. I am writing to ask for detailed information regarding the date, program, living and refreshment costs.

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with , could you please update me what is the starting and ending times of the seminar.

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, who will be conducting the training and what are the requirements to register me and is there any registration fee which I have to pay in advance.

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, how can I book accommodation and how much do I need to pay for 3 days and 4 nights' stay. I want to utilize your accommodation facility which was mentioned in the advertisement. It would be great if you can answer my concerned queries and you can send me through my email address or SMS. Yours faithfully, XYZ

mahmood.hafiz2272Mon Mar 28 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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162 words

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

In some culture children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that children should be taught to be competitive in school, while others think that they should be taught to cooperate with others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that local authorities should control where building can be constructed. Others think that everyone should be free to build where they like without permission. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.