You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am Hafiz Mahmood Hussain, working as a project manager in Stelogix Technologies, Sialkot Pakistan. I saw an advertisement about the seminar on advanced programming languages, that will be arranged by your company in India. I am writing to ask for detailed information regarding the date, program, living and refreshment costs.

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with , could you please update me what is the starting and ending times of the seminar.

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, who will be conducting the training and what are the requirements to register me and is there any registration fee which I have to pay in advance.

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, how can I book accommodation and how much do I need to pay for 3 days and 4 nights' stay. I want to utilize your accommodation facility which was mentioned in the advertisement. It would be great if you can answer my concerned queries and you can send me through my email address or SMS. Yours faithfully, XYZ

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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