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you are looking for a full time job. write a letter to an employent agency. introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you hav

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I am searching for a permanent job for myself. Regarding my educational background, I hold a graduation degree in the
food
 chain and I am residing in the Brampton city of Ontario in Canada. On top of that, I am working as a part-time manager in the renowned store "Tim Horton" As far as kind jobs are concerned, I prefer to do a job at any
food
 court where I have to perform manually
instead
 of sitting jobs as I have relevant experience in that field. Plus, I
also
 recommend long-term care jobs since these services have adequate remuneration.
According to
 relevant experience, I have 2 years of experience as a supervisor in the
food
 chain and a certification in
food
 service.
Moreover
, I am acquainted with multiple skills ranging from communication, and customer satisfaction to resolving any workplace issues. your cooperation in
this
 matter is greatly appreciated.
furthermore
, an open line of communication, from your side, in
this
 case, would greatly help out. Yours Faithfully, Jaspreet
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greeting and closing
Ensure that you open your letter with a proper salutation, such as 'Dear [agency name or title],' to set a more personalized and professional tone.
logical structure
Maintain a clear logical structure by organizing content into distinct paragraphs each containing a single idea or point. This also helps with readability and coherence.
greeting and closing
Close your letter with a proper sign-off, such as 'Sincerely' or 'Best regards,' followed by your full name to maintain formality and professionalism.
complete response
Make sure to fully address all parts of the prompt by introducing yourself, specifying the type of job you want, and discussing your experience and skills. Use details and examples for each to provide a more complete response.
suitable writing tone
Use formal language and a polite writing tone throughout. Avoid informal expressions and make sure your sentence structure and vocabulary reflect a formal job application.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single theme to aid in the logical presentation of information.
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