Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays,
people
have huge enthusiasm for a foreign language
. Even, some countries require this
as a mandatory to be used. On the other hand
, people
think that it will lead to a social and practical lack in society. It's agreed that foreign language
can help us to adapt to the globalization era, but it will create a gap between the community with different factors, such
as age.
Firstly
, the use
of a foreign language
is one of the most important things as we are now in a globalization era which gives people
from overseas access to not only for economy but also
other aspects of our life like education and culture. For example
, some universities in Indonesia have exchange programs for their students to study in foreign universities, like Europe, Australia, or America where English is a language
that is
used as a requirement; a student who has a minimum 6.5 IELST score can join the program. Thus
, the language
helps us to have opportunities to get benefits from the era. So, the use
of a foreign language
is important now.
Nevertheless
, the use
of that as an obligation will have a negative impact on certain communities like the old generation. For instance
, in old age is not easy to study something new like a language
, even free-access facilities for those exist, but it most likely only can be accessed from the Internet which uses a computer or handphone. The social barrier will happen to the old and young generation. So, it should not be an obligation for societies.
To sum up
, proficiency in the use
of a foreign language
is understandable as a thing that people
should have, but as civilians of a country, it will lead to social and practical gaps among the residents if we use
it as a
mandatory. I believe the Correct article usage
apply
use
of a foreign language
in a certain context will be helpful in facing globalization.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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