At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The population is ageing in most
countries
and the number of elders has been increasing. Use synonyms
However
, today in some regions, the proportion of young adults is way above the elderly. Linking Words
This
could bring many opportunities to the Linking Words
country
while there are some future drawbacks.
The growth in the number of young adults is present in developing Use synonyms
countries
. Which could open up more opportunities for the Use synonyms
country
. Youngsters can be more productive than elders. Use synonyms
For example
, they have more energy to work faster and in longer shifts. Linking Words
In addition
, the development of the Linking Words
country
speeds up by a huge figure of fresh workers. Use synonyms
Such
as scientific advancements and financial achievements that are being achieved by the most successful organizations.
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On the other hand
, there will be some imminent drawbacks to the Linking Words
country
which have a large fraction of youngsters. The agrarian is going to deal with a tsunami of elders, in the Use synonyms
next
40 to 50 years, who will be seeking someone to take care of them. Linking Words
For instance
, European Linking Words
countries
like Germany have a much higher proportion of old people compared to other groups. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, high demand for jobs is another drawback to having a large figure of workers. Like developing Linking Words
countries
that have been dealing with Use synonyms
this
kind of situation while not having enough vacancies to employ everyone.
In conclusion, A large proportion of young adults can speed up the agrarian's development, Linking Words
However
, there will be consequences for a big number of old people in the future. In my opinion Linking Words
countries
with Use synonyms
this
difference in age groups, must take action to prevent future disasters.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...