Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Success is the key to
happiness
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they say and think that financials is a major attribute to joy for
people
but others think that being happy is
as
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a result of other things like love and family.
Firstly
, it is undeniable that everyone deserves a joyful life.
This
is why
people
presume that one can only be truly satisfied if they are successful.
For instance
, things that make
people
excited are stuff that requires spending money,
such
as an expensive vacation, designer clothes etc. But these can only be attained if one has succeeded economically.
This
is why
for
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much financial prosperity is the key to happiness.
However
, other
people
say that success is not the key to one's true joy in life there are many factors that are important for a satisfactory living. For ,example many successful musicians in the world are among the most depressed
people
in society because they lack love and family to keep truly satisfied. For
this
reason, many other factors are necessary for happiness. In ,
conclusion
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I agree with both ideas and think that economic success may contribute to joyousness but other elements like love and families are
also
important .
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