Working from home is becoming increasingly popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

Nowadays,telecommuting becoming
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popular among
employees
.
Therefore
,more and more people
work
at
home
,
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think it has several advantages.There are both merits and demerits are elaborated
further
.
To begin
with, out of all the foremost
advantage
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is the
time
and cost.To explain it, we all know that in
recnet
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recent
times fuel
such
as petrol is very expensive, it is very difficult for
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average
salary workers. Regarding
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work
they can
savea
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save
save a
lots of fuel cost.
Moreover
,
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area has lots of traffic issue,many times
employees
would not reach at a proper
time
.
Hence
,they can save
the
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times
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by telecommuting.
Furthermore
,these types of
work
will give
a
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time
to families,like during
work
they can have lunch ,breakfast with family
aslo
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also
,can
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play games like video games, watch
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movie
movies
.
For example
,
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has found that
home
workers are
more
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happier rather than
the
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office workers.
On the other hand
,
also
, it has
sodisadvantages
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disadvantages
that we cannot ignore.
Firstly
, if
person
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start
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job
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from
home
,
then
he/she would
be away
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form
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from
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theri
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their
the
boss,
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a
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less
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chances of promotion because they are no longer their supervisor's favourite.
For instance
, the data was revealed in 2020,
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% of promoter
employees
were from
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,
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and only
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10% of
employees
were
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telecommuting.
Secondly
, by
home
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job
they might be distracted through some noise
such
construction,or Tv volume, kids' noise.
Thus
, Many types of
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disturbance
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a house
job
. In
conlusion
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conclusion
,
home
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job
has some drawbacks like can lost the concentration, office issues as well as
disturbacne
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disturbance
.But
i
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believe that
house
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job
is best for that emplyessemplyess who has less salary they can save fuel along with
time
.
also
,
can
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extra
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time
spend with family
.
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