Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I had seen the advertisement regarding unpaid work helping at the hospital. I would like to tell you that I am interested to do help at the hospital in my free time.
Firstly
, I want to convey to you that I am very much interested to do voluntary work in my free time.
Moreover
, I have some experience in doing hospital work and managing patient's
crowd
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. Not only managing the crowd but
also
familiar with hospital hygiene.
Additionally
, I am familiar with hand hygiene policies and I can educate all the staff and patients who are in the hospital. I am well versed in patient safety precautions.
Besides
this
, I can able to manage patients who are coming in emergency conditions and take care of them till they discharge.
Although
I am studying I am interested to do voluntary service in your hospital. I will be available daily in the evenings and
also
full time on the weekends. I request you to provide
this
oppurtunity
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opportunity
to serve freely. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Tejaswi.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • volunteer
  • unpaid work
  • free time
  • dedication
  • healthcare
  • assist
  • patients
  • administrative tasks
  • commitment
  • flexibility
  • personal satisfaction
  • inspired
  • community service
  • contribute
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