Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
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people
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by fortune and materiality. In my opinion, I strongly agree that because success
always brings treasure as well as luxury material life
to people
and I believe that environment generates a person who will be successful.
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and luxury life
to people
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money
and also
acquire reputations. For instance
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money
to them. Thus
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the successful
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people
have
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, plenty of successful people
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a great
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