The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is one of the most severe problems that the environment is getting contaminated by the usage of
fuel
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. Concerning
this
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, there are some people who insist that the overall cost of fossil
fuel
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should increase so that it can demotivate them to use their own vehicles.
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, because of some reasons that can not be ignored, I personally believe that the government should think of other methods to save the earth aside from increasing the price of ammunition. On one hand, it is partially understandable that by making the value of
fuel
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more expensive, it can be expected that the use of cars could decrease.
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, in order not to spend much money on transportation, more people would use public transportation
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as subway, train, and buses rather than their own vehicles.
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, being concerned about future expenditure, more and more young citizens would avoid buying a new car in the
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place, which can lead the positive result for the environment.
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, it can be problematic to raise the price of
fuel
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considering the people whose job is related to vehicles.
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, once the charge for ammunition increases, taxi drivers usually have a hard time keeping the cost.
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, as the rich might not mind the increased charge of it, they still keep using their private vehicle, which is not fair to everyone. To sum up, though the decreased usage of
fuel
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might be expected in some ways, considering the fairness and the ones whose jobs are inevitably related to it, the cost of
fuel
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should not increase.
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