Most of the world's problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some
people
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that huge growth in the
world
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's population is
one
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of the most important reasons for global issues. While it cannot be ignored that the excessive number of
people
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may cause a lot of critical
problems
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around the
world
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, I believe that most of the
world
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's
problems
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are the reasons
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other resources. On the
one
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hand, it is a very general fact that
overpopulation
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causes
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a lot of issues these days.
Firstly
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,
overpopulation
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is
one
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of the main
causes
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of global warming. Because, as the culture explosion happens, the need
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fuels for living and transportation rises and
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of that, the production of CO2 and air-polluting in the nature becomes higher which leads to global warming.
Secondly
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,
overpopulation
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may cause poverty and penury in societies because of the shortage opportunities of
jobs
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for jobs
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. These days the
world
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is going to have fewer
labors
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and most jobs are done by artificial intelligence. So the new
people
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will face unemployment and it
causes
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global poverty.
On the other hand
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, over the
last
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century
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there are several
problems
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, regardless of population size. For
one
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, the war between the countries is
one
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of the most critical worries and
problems
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in the
world
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which is caused by the policy differences and power-seeking between politicians and normal
people
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have no role.
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it is clear that
overpopulation
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has no effect on wars.
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, another big challenge in the
world
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is that eventually, the power of the entire
world
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economy is controlled by
one
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or two countries and it
causes
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the
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poverty and disability in other countries.
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, today
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the USA
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is exclusively powered and every single decision of the politicians of
this
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country can change the value of a country's currency and
as a
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result
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make its
people
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miserable.
This
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is
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completely irrelevant to population growth. To conclude,
overpopulation
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can lead to a variety of
problems
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to
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individuals, but there are some other important sources
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the
world
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's main issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population density
  • Sustainable
  • Resource depletion
  • Ecosystems
  • Urbanization
  • Demographic pressure
  • Infrastructure
  • Sanitation
  • Renewable resources
  • Biodiversity
  • Life expectancy
  • Fertility rate
  • Carbon footprint
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Emigration
  • Birth control
  • Global warming
  • Deforestation
  • Carbon emissions
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