Most of the world's problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some
people
that huge growth in the
world
's population is
one
of the most important reasons for global issues. While it cannot be ignored that the excessive number of
people
may cause a lot of critical
problems
around the
world
, I believe that most of the
world
's
problems
are the reasons
of
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other resources. On the
one
hand, it is a very general fact that
overpopulation
causes
a lot of issues these days.
Firstly
,
overpopulation
is
one
of the main
causes
of global warming. Because, as the culture explosion happens, the need
of
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fuels for living and transportation rises and
as a result
of that, the production of CO2 and air-polluting in the nature becomes higher which leads to global warming.
Secondly
,
overpopulation
may cause poverty and penury in societies because of the shortage opportunities of
jobs
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. These days the
world
is going to have fewer
labors
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and most jobs are done by artificial intelligence. So the new
people
will face unemployment and it
causes
global poverty.
On the other hand
, over the
last
century
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there are several
problems
, regardless of population size. For
one
, the war between the countries is
one
of the most critical worries and
problems
in the
world
which is caused by the policy differences and power-seeking between politicians and normal
people
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Also
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it is clear that
overpopulation
has no effect on wars.
Besides
, another big challenge in the
world
is that eventually, the power of the entire
world
economy is controlled by
one
or two countries and it
causes
the
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poverty and disability in other countries.
For example
, today
USA
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is exclusively powered and every single decision of the politicians of
this
country can change the value of a country's currency and
as a
result
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make its
people
miserable.
This
is
also
completely irrelevant to population growth. To conclude,
overpopulation
can lead to a variety of
problems
to
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individuals, but there are some other important sources
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the
world
's main issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population density
  • Sustainable
  • Resource depletion
  • Ecosystems
  • Urbanization
  • Demographic pressure
  • Infrastructure
  • Sanitation
  • Renewable resources
  • Biodiversity
  • Life expectancy
  • Fertility rate
  • Carbon footprint
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Emigration
  • Birth control
  • Global warming
  • Deforestation
  • Carbon emissions
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