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You recently gave a successful presentation at work. You borrowed a book from a colleague, which helped prepare for the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter ● say what the presentation was about ● explain why the presentation was important ● describe how the book helped you prepare for the presentation

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well, It's been a while since we met on our football field so let's make a plan and we shall meet. I want to mention a big thanks to you in
this
 letter for the book you gave me for my office
presentation
 and it helped me a lot. I gave a
presentation
 on "
Product
 development" which we are planning to release
next
 month, my
presentation
 covered all the development steps and costs of
this
product
. I am really excited about
this
product
 and expect some positive results from it.
This
presentation
 was very much important for me as I am the one who designed and named
this
product
, my managers and company have a big hope for
this
product
.
Finally
, I want to thank you for the book you provided me for the preparation,
this
 book not only helped me on various points
,
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 but
also
 gave me the confidence to speak on different sections in my slides. I can't wait to see you! Yours faithfully, Zee
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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