You want to join a local club or organization. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and explain why you are interested. - Ask about membership requirements. - Enquire about the next meeting or event.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my interest/willingness to become a member of your esteemed Firebolt
club
at Street no.1.
I am Jacob, resident of street number two, William Colony which is on the west of your club
. I am an ex-army serviceman and gold medalist in the shooting range of 100 metres. I am particularly interested in the variation of guns that your club
provides as well as
the flying target hit advertisement board left me spellbound.
So, let me know the requirements for the one and three-month subscriptions and any kind of safety equipment that I need to carry with me. In addition
, if I want to practise shooting 25-30 rounds, how many bullets will be allowed to me?
Lastly
, I came to know that there is a special group for retired army personnel so not only would I like to join the one but I also
want to know the date for the next get-together or any shooting event which will be organised this
month.
I hope you will consider my request and allow me to be a member of your club
.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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To improve coherence, consider making your paragraphs slightly more distinct by elaborating on one idea more completely before moving to another. This will help to ensure that each paragraph advances the content logically.
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Make sure every query is fully clear. For instance, specifying what kind of safety equipment is needed for a shooting practice may provide more depth.
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You have included all parts of the task: introducing yourself, asking about membership requirements, and inquiring about the next meeting or event.
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Your writing tone is polite and formal, which is appropriate for this type of letter.
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The paragraphing is logical, with each paragraph addressing a part of the assignment, making it easy for the reader to follow.
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You have used a proper greeting and closing which are consistent throughout the letter.