Young people who commit crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The precedence of penalization in a society for all citizens which was always a hotly debatable topic now has become more controversial while copious peoples claim that every person in a society should be treated equally if they committed an offence.
on the other hand
, critics argue that there should be relaxation for teenagers if they are involved in
such
activities. In my, opinion the formal propositions appear to be more rational.
This
essay will
further
elaborate on my views on the positive and negative impacts of trends and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly
, commencing with the
first
argument I firmly believed that anyone in a culture irrespective of gender and age group should be treated uniformly because the law of justice is even for anyone who commits a crime .
in addition
, it is a deep lesson for every folk of the nation and brings harmony among the communities.
Furthermore
. it has been increasingly assessed that nowadays the youngers are extensively involved in street crimes.
for instance
, a survey report indicates in Pakistan that more than 80% of snatchers are usually teenagers so
therefore
,
such
folk should be penalized in order to reduce
such
activities that are
also
a lesson for adults.
Secondly
, moving toward the
second
argument there are myriad things in favour of
firstly
developing countries have equal law and regulation and the nation of that country have to obey them if anyone violates the rules and regulations should be punished in order to boost the confidence of people and make it a prosperous and progressive nation.
Moreover
, where there are dual standards for the different age groups they would not be able to develop effective control systems.to exemplify in Sudia Arabia there is an identical justice system for all and no one is superior to others and that's the reason there are fewer crime rates reported every year about 10% of world crimes.
Finally
, to recapitulate, according to the aforementioned arguments reach a conclusion that everyone in
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should be penalized in the same manner if they violate the law and regulations it is not only advantageous for teenagers to refrain but
also
a lot of lessons for all age groups.
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