You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them that you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

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Hi Rajat, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to break the news that

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finally

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moved to a brand new flat. I have been meaning to relocate for a very long time. As you know, the place

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lived previously was quite isolated from the town.

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was missing out on several job opportunities which could have been beneficial for my career.

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, the past location raised safety concerns as the street lights were always

non functional

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non-functional

. These things pushed me to move sooner

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later. My new flat is everything

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could have ever asked for. It is spacious, furnished and spotlessly clean. The best part is that it is located in the central region

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makes travelling convenient. There are several trails nearby which

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cannot wait to explore in my free time. I cannot wait for you to see my new flat and share

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thoughts on the same.

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organizing

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house warming

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housewarming

party for a bunch of our friends next weekend. There is no dress code for the party

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you are welcome to come by anytime after noon. Give greetings to your parents and see you soon. Best Wishes, Anchal

rajatrajatsharmasharma2

Sep 11, 2026

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Give a clear day and time for the party, so your friend can plan to come.

task response

Use “your thoughts”, not “yours thoughts”.

coherence and cohesion

Your ideas are in a clear order. You can make the invite even clearer by putting the day, time, and place in one short line.

coherence and cohesion

Use capital “I” each time. Also write “non-functional” with a hyphen.

task response

You answer all parts: why you moved, what the new flat is like, and an invite to visit.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a friendly start and end, and each main part has its own paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Words such as “As a result”, “Also”, and “Therefore” help the reader follow your ideas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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