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Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future, while others think that it is a dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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This
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 is the 21st Century, and there are several scientific and technical inventions. The robot is one of the significant automated processes today and has several benefits. Some oppose
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 as hazardous machines that have a negative impact on society. In
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 views and sharing my vision. On the one hand, automated processes had eliminated the dangerous
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 for humans because
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 are capable of working in a hazardous environment.
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, they can
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 in high temperatures, and toxic areas, lift heavy loads and can
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 continuously in the big factories and industries.
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, in restaurants, they can
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 as a chef, waitress, cleaners and so on which saves lots of time and money.
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, the auto-driven cars and cameras save lots of lives on daily bases.
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, auto machines killed the jobs. People lose their
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 and have job crises.
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, if
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 are implemented in the workplaces like hotels, restaurants, factories, and companies, the public loses their
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 and increases the shortage of
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 in society. Ultimately it
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 to hunger among the public. In conclusion, there is no doubt that
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 are a great invention of
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science, and ease the lives and save money and time of the public.
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, we cannot deny the fact that auto machines replace the workers and cause
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 crises in the community.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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