In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Choosing a

place

to live is a significant decision. In some countries, especially Asians

people

will often prefer buying their own

house

because it gives them a feeling of a stable life. I must disagree,

however

, I agree with

this

opinion.

Firstly

, Owning a

home

helps ensure privacy and safety for homeowners. A

home

is a private

place

for family life, where all members can do anything they want without worrying about the landlord's scrutiny.

For instance

, a few years ago, my friend used to live in a renting department, but she was not satisfied with

this

place

because the security of

this

apartment was not guaranteed and she was always bothered by her

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. For

this

reason, she is determined to save money to buy her own

house

.

Therefore

, owning a

home

gives a safe and comfortable feeling.

Secondly

, once a person owns their own

home

, they are able to spend their money more freely and consider different employment without the fear of becoming homeless.

For example

, those who have their own

house

,

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feel secure in their careers because they do not have to worry about their family not having a

house

to live in.

Although

this

seems plausible;

however

, renting an apartment might help you ease your financial burden. As a renter, you do not worry about land tax, mortgage, or loans. For those

people

who have to borrow a huge amount of money to buy a

house

, owning a

house

would be a negative situation for them.

For example

, my uncle took out huge loans and end up repaying the amount over a very long time.

People

with limited economic conditions,

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should consider carefully before buying a

house

. In conclusion, buying your own

house

for having a private

place

where you can feel enjoyable and secure is better than renting an apartment. For those who have not bought a

house

, do not feel pressured because sometimes in life, renting a

house

is

also

great when just being near the

people

you love.