Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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days, a huge number of

people

journey abroad for their enjoyment. While, part of

people

consider that, travelling to foreign

countries

has a negative effect for places where

people

visited. I strongly agree with

this

statement,

impact

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of

people

to

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countries

often show with their

act

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such

as

polluting

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, local concern.

However

, it is clear that

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citizens go abroad in order to relax from their daily staff, even more

countries

offer facilities to tourists.

To begin

with, air and

environment

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pollution is

major

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and usual issue in today’s world.

Thus

, all

countries

around the world should prevent it and

to

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deal with it they made rules, which are violated by migrants. Some

people

believe that

,

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tourists do not care about other

countries

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natural environment, while some inadequate

person

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do not even think about protecting it.

Therefore

, pollution of cities

are

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rising day by day, because of

lack

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of knowledge of individuals. On

other hand

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, it is obvious that

,

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most

of

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people

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the people

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want to enjoy

for

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other spot’s spectacular

view

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and nature.

For instance

, if residents do not have

such

facilities and objects in

own

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country, they try to visit places where they are not been.

In addition

,

countries

offer facilities to attract individuals to visit their cities, in order to make rise their

economy

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status. To sum up, individuals want to journey to other

countries

for pleasure, to feel something new and intriguing in their life. Despite

the

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this

fact, it is vital to not forget about our

surrounding

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for places which gave options for tourists,

also

for each person.