Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In these
days, a huge number of Change preposition
These
people
journey abroad for their enjoyment. While, part of people
consider that, travelling to foreign countries
has a negative effect for places where people
visited. I strongly agree with this
statement, impact
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the impact
people
to
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on
countries
often show with their act
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activities
such
as polluting
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pollution
However
, it is clear that,
citizens go abroad in order to relax from their daily staff, even more Remove the comma
apply
countries
offer facilities to tourists.
To begin
with, air and environment
pollution is Replace the word
environmental
major
and usual issue in today’s world. Add an article
a major
the major
Thus
, all countries
around the world should prevent it and to
deal with it they made rules, which are violated by migrants. Some Change the verb form
apply
people
believe that,
tourists do not care about other Remove the comma
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countries
natural environment, while some inadequate Change noun form
countries'
country's
person
do not even think about protecting it. Fix the agreement mistake
people
Therefore
, pollution of cities are
rising day by day, because of Change the verb form
is
lack
of knowledge of individuals.
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the lack
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, it is obvious thatChange the wording
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,
most Remove the comma
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of
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people
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the people
for
other spot’s spectacular Change preposition
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view
and nature. Fix the agreement mistake
views
For instance
, if residents do not have such
facilities and objects in own
country, they try to visit places where they are not been. Correct pronoun usage
their own
In addition
, countries
offer facilities to attract individuals to visit their cities, in order to make rise their economy
status.
To sum up, individuals want to journey to other Replace the word
economic
countries
for pleasure, to feel something new and intriguing in their life. Despite the
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this
fact, it is vital to not forget about our surrounding
for places which gave options for tourists, Fix the agreement mistake
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