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Being good at mathematics depends on a persons natural ability as well as quality of teaching they recieve . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#mathematics #persons #ability #quality #recieve
It is argued that
possesing
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possessing
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 good mathematical
skills
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 dependent on the inherited ability and the education they attain. In fact, I completely agree with
this
 notion because genetics play a pivotal role in our learning ability and good teachers
enhances
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 the
skills
 in
mathematics
.
First
 of all, few children are born with inherited intelligence which makes them better
in
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 learning
mathematics
. To elaborate, they are born
genious
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genius
 due to their genetics ,
such
 extraordinary
characterstics
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characteristics
leads
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 to
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high
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hight
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 intelligence quotient.
As a result
, they have excellent
skills
 in solving mathematical problems.
For instance
, Ramanujam was the great Indian
mathematacian
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mathematician
 who
astonised
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astonished
 the world with his extraordinary talent. Later, scientists discovered that he had a high IQ of 160, which was rare to
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 in general human beings,
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 why he was regarded as
prodigy
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 in the
feild
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field
 of
mathematics
 .
Therefore
, to excel in
mathematics
 inborn intelligence
also
 plays a vital role. Another point to consider is
superior
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 quality of teaching polishes the learning
skills
 of
students
.
This
 is because
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 a good coach helps the
students
 to learn
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complex subjects with ease. Alongside, it develops
the
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 passion to learn
mathematics
.
Consequently
, pupils focus more on the subject which leads to better academic performance.
For example
, a recent study concluded that if a school has
good
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mathematics
 teacher, it will enhance the performance of
students
 in exams by double.
Thus
, coaches with better teaching abilities can
expotentially
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exponentially
 increase the
skills
 of
students
 in solving
mathematics
. In conclusion, I strongly concur that to be good in
mathematics
 one should have inborn
skills
 and better teaching facilities because genetics play
an
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 crucial role in deciding the learning potential of children and having mentors with superior teaching techniques
impove
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improve
 the learning graph of
sudents
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students
.
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