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IELTS 15 Writing task 1 Some people say that advertising is extremely successluf at preduading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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The diagram illustrates the key stages in the method of making instant
noodles
. Overall, the process consists of converting
flour
 to edible
noodles
cups
 through a series of stages.
Firstly
, the stored
flour
 is converted into dough
sheets
, nextly these
sheets
 are cooked and dried, processing
them
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and driving them toward the
last
 stage, placing them in
noodles
cups
, dressing them with vegetables and species, finalising with their labelling and sealing.
To begin
 with,
flour
 is stored in storage silos, ready for its usage.
Then
 the
flour
 is mixed together with water and oil in enormous mixing pots, resulting in dough
sheets
, made by long rollers that moulded the obtained mix.
Additionally
, the produced
sheets
 are
cutted
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 and rolled up in disco shaped
noodles
, preparing them for their cocction.
Secondly
, the disk-shaped
noodles
 are cooked using oil, getting dried and eliminating the extra oil from them. The dried cooked disks are now stored in
noodles
cups
 and are mixed with different vegetables and species.
Lastly
, the prepared
cups
 are labelled and sealed, ready for its consumption.
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