Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

While it's believed by some people that young adults participating in unpaid

work

in their leisure time would benefit them as individuals and the community in general, I indeed think that teenagers should be integrated into

such

activities from

such

young age, which empower their

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of citizenship and responsibility towards the

society

.

Firstly

,

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teenagehood

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is a critical time in

the

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person's life, so participating in unpaid community

work

would benefit these teenagers.

in other words

, they learn that they are part of

this

society

so they take responsibility

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keeping problem-free.

For instance

, if children are given

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work

of collecting the

neighberhood's

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neighborhood's

wastes, they will learn that keeping the road clean falls

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them and that wastes should be

disposed

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in a proper way.

Therefore

,

youngesters

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youngsters

should be engaged in local activities since it shapes

there

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their

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personnalities

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personalities

to grow into a good

citizen

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in the future.

Secondly

,

those

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non-paid activities made by these young adults, the

society

will thrive. To put it differently, empowering

society

comes from its citizens,

moreover

working in groups provides an atmosphere of solidarity and togetherness.

For example

, teenagers are learning how to care and respect for those who are in need while working in a school of

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handicapped

indicated

people. social

work

raise

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the awareness and empathy of

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the youngest

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, these

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why it should be

requiered

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required

recovered

. in conclusion, there are many good reasons why unpaid community

work

must be introduced at

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such

young age

,

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since it not only

help

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helps

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them grow

personaly

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personally

personality

but

also

it is the hope for a bright future and the

society

's prosperity.