Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
While it's believed by some people that young adults participating in unpaid
work
in their leisure time would benefit them as individuals and the community in general, I indeed think that teenagers should be integrated into Use synonyms
such
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of citizenship and responsibility towards the Correct your spelling
sense
society
.
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Firstly
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teenage-hood
is a critical time in Correct your spelling
teenagehood
the
person's life, so participating in unpaid community Correct article usage
a
work
would benefit these teenagers. Use synonyms
in other words
, they learn that they are part of Linking Words
this
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society
so they take responsibility Use synonyms
in
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, if children are given Linking Words
a
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the
work
of collecting the Use synonyms
neighberhood's
wastes, they will learn that keeping the road clean falls Correct your spelling
neighborhood's
into
them and that wastes should be Change preposition
on
disposed
in a proper way. Add the preposition
ofdisposed
Therefore
, Linking Words
youngesters
should be engaged in local activities since it shapes Correct your spelling
youngsters
there
Correct your spelling
their
personnalities
to grow into a good Correct your spelling
personalities
citizen
in the future.
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citizens
Secondly
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those
non-paid activities made by these young adults, the Change preposition
with those
society
will thrive. To put it differently, empowering Use synonyms
society
comes from its citizens, Use synonyms
moreover
working in groups provides an atmosphere of solidarity and togetherness. Linking Words
For example
, teenagers are learning how to care and respect for those who are in need while working in a school of Linking Words
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people. social Correct your spelling
handicapped
indicated
work
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raise
the awareness and empathy of Change the verb form
raises
youngest
, these Correct article usage
the youngest
is
why it should be Change the verb form
are
requiered
.
in conclusion, there are many good reasons why unpaid community Correct your spelling
required
recovered
work
must be introduced at Use synonyms
a
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,
since it not only Remove the comma
apply
help
them grow Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
personaly
but Correct your spelling
personally
personality
also
it is the hope for a bright future and the Linking Words
society
's prosperity.Use synonyms
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