whoever controls media is controls the opinion and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to recitify it. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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For years,

media

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had been viewed as a source to inform

people

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about current affairs, but recently the role it plays in our lives has changed in a way to control our beliefs and opinions. It is widely accepted that the influence it has on humans is irrefutable and irreversible. I am completely in agreement with the above-said opinion.

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of all, one reason for

people

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being affected is the interaction they have daily with

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impartial

media

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. Reporters,

news

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publishers, and broadcasters, who

apears

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appears

continuously on every gadget

people

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use, often fail to report

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news

a piece of news

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news

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without favouring a party.

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, during an

ellection

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election

,There

are

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news

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all over

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media

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the media

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which divides into two parties and advocates

different

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for different

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candidates and facing

these

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this news

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news

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is inevitable. Since almost all

people

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are following

news

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voluntarily or

involunteerly

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involuntarily

by watching TVs or surfing nets, they can be persuaded easily to change their attitudes based on parties the sites and pages they follow advocate.

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, no one is protected from changing their opinion as long as they are listening

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to or

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watching

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news

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the news

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, the authorities that are regulating

medias

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media

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are promoting

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impact. It is hard to find a

news

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program not

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to be

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politically biased or motivated. These authorities are powerful ones who are investing millions of dollars yearly in

media

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to advertise what they want.

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, factories are offering great sums of money to

famouse

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famous

people

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to advertise their products.

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, competing with

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income is impossible for regular

people

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and the power those authorities have

preserve

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this

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problem. To sum up, the influence of

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in our lives can not get combated. I believe

this

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problem will prevail due to the

continuouse

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continuous

interaction of

people

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with impartial

medias

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media

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and the money

that is

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being paid on

this

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phenomenon.

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