whoever controls media is controls the opinion and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to recitify it. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

For years,
media
had been viewed as a source to inform
people
about current affairs, but recently the role it plays in our lives has changed in a way to control our beliefs and opinions. It is widely accepted that the influence it has on humans is irrefutable and irreversible. I am completely in agreement with the above-said opinion.
First
of all, one reason for
people
being affected is the interaction they have daily with
this
impartial
media
. Reporters,
news
publishers, and broadcasters, who
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appears
continuously on every gadget
people
use, often fail to report
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news
without favouring a party.
For example
, during an
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election
,There
are
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news
all over
media
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which divides into two parties and advocates
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candidates and facing
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news
is inevitable. Since almost all
people
are following
news
voluntarily or
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involuntarily
by watching TVs or surfing nets, they can be persuaded easily to change their attitudes based on parties the sites and pages they follow advocate.
Therefore
, no one is protected from changing their opinion as long as they are listening
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watching
news
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.
Moreover
, the authorities that are regulating
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are promoting
this
impact. It is hard to find a
news
program not
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politically biased or motivated. These authorities are powerful ones who are investing millions of dollars yearly in
media
to advertise what they want.
For instance
, factories are offering great sums of money to
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famous
people
to advertise their products.
Thus
, competing with
this
income is impossible for regular
people
and the power those authorities have
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this
problem. To sum up, the influence of
media
in our lives can not get combated. I believe
this
problem will prevail due to the
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continuous
interaction of
people
with impartial
medias
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and the money
that is
being paid on
this
phenomenon.
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