Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

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Riches states should support undeveloped states during natural catastrophes.

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essay agrees with the statement because wealthy lands have a moral obligation and resources to do so.

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, developed countries for many years have deprived the poorest nations for centuries.

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, not only the colonization, wars and slavery

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took advantage of their native natural assets.

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, these societies don't have an economy

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stable and able to affront a quick recovery after these environmental disasters impact their land. A study found that countries in Central America take more than 10 years to economically recuperate after being devastated by hurricanes. The most prosperous nations have a strong lasting economy and plenty of human and economical resources which can help and support these needed societies.

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, after a phenomenon like hurricanes or volcanoes, people will need food, water and medicine supplies to help them affront all the damage received.

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, they can send doctors, nurses and technicians to assist the injured people, and

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to rebuild the cities. Recent research found that when a country received professional rescues groups with the latest technology and their trained dogs they are able to localise more buried people in the ruins and save them by giving medical treatment. To conclude, I believe developed lands are able to provide help to the poorest ones when they have been knocked by natural phenomena because they have the most advanced technology, great prepared and capable professionals and most importantly, historically, they have benefitted from these territories.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Humanitarian relief
Infrastructure
Global solidarity
Disproportionately
External assistance
Rebuilding efforts
Disaster response
Investment in stability
Dependency theory
Responsible intervention
Paternalistic
Shared humanity
Sovereignty
Capabilities
Fatality rates

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

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