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Writing Samples
Band 6

You have seen an advert online for volunteers to help people in the community. There are various roles available and you would like to apply. Write a letter to the organisation. In your letter explain what type of voluntary work you would be interested in doing. describe any skills and experience you have in this area. request more information and an interview.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
in
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 express my interest in the volunteer position recently advertised online. I would particularly like to apply for a role that involves assisting elderly people in the community, as I enjoy helping
other
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 and making a positive change in their lives. In terms of experience, I have previously volunteered at a local community centre, where I helped organise events and supported individuals with basic tasks. Through the experience, I have developed strong communication and interpersonal skills,
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 patience and a caring attitude. I would be grateful if you could provide me with
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 details about the available role and application process. I would
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 appreciate the opportunity to attend an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Marie

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Add one more clear detail about the work you want to do.
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Ask one or two more direct questions for more full response.
coherence and cohesion
Check small word errors like 'in express', 'helping other', and 'futher'.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' to make ideas flow more smoothly.
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You answer all parts of the task.
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Your tone is polite and right for a formal letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is easy to follow from start to end.
coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph has one main idea.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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